Slowly the Kirk door creaked open as the man busted through the door looking for the diamond. he jumped onto sheen and rolled under the table. The guard gushed out of the gates to stop the thief, the battle went back and fourth with the thief almost died. The guards garment was shredded to bits as he was left to be agnoy. The man was swound in relief twas a very hard battle it could have gone either, the guards body was strewn as he continued his search for the diamond, as he went up the stairs he could already see the brightness of the diamond. Above him he could also smell the scent of torture. He didn’t understand aught, why was this happening? He said to himself ” this might because this museum was recent robbed and it hasn’t be open since.” Right next to the museum their was a river of fotham, each person that had been caught stealing would either be fiendish or thrown in the river head first. He continued striding up the stairs, suddenly… thud after thud a man slowly walked down the stairs completely battered to bits he collapsed on the floor. The man knew this was serious. In curiosity he rushed up the stairs to find out more, then he said if he gave this a bit of time they might be caught off guard and he could get the diamond easily. Morrow he was back in the museum not only find the diamond but who owns the building now, thus he made his task even harder than at first.He ran across the building rapidly and entered another Kirk door. He saw the owner he was covered in filth his eyes were blood shot red. They had a good stare off their eyes were getting watery as they began to sprint towards each other in fury they fought like never before, with both of them torn to shreds the man lunged in his pocket for his dagger and stabbed the owner, behind the man he he saw the shiny glistening diamond he left the Kirk triumphantly.
Author: Sa-Sean
Part A 20 unusual words
- Furrow: A long, narrow trench made in the ground by a plough.
- Thy: Archaic or dialect form.
- Thus: As a result or consequence of this.
- Quoth: Used only in first and third person singular before the subject.
- Garment: A piece of clothing.
- Hath: Archaic third person singular present of have.
- Swound: The act of fainting.
- Fotham: A unit equal to six feet.
- Abide: Accept or act in accordance.
- Gushed: Flow out of something in a rapid and plentiful.
- Agnoy: Extreme physical or mental suffering.
- Twas: A contraction for it was.
- Strewn: To spread something untidily.
- Kirk: A Scottish word for church.
- Morrow: The following day.
- Fiendish: Extremely cruel or unpleasant.
- Aught: Anything at all.
- Sheen: A soft surface.
- May`st: Archaic second person singular present of may.
- Aye: Said to express assent.
Part the seventh
During part the seventh another ship came along and appeared to be steering his way he man on the other boat was curious about what was the shining light on the mariners boat.
As he got closer he saw a group lifeless people standing in a line the boat sailed slowly. The mariner felt like he was lifeless like hid crew mates as the boat crumbled to bits as he floated across the sea.
The sailer in the other boat dragged the mariner onto the boat. He forced the truth out of the mariner for something that seemed quite starnge in a normal humans point of view. So as they sailed along the sea the mariner told the sailer his journey and the sailer was shocked about how he is still living today.
I think that the lesson of this story is to not harm something that has not harmed you for example in this story when the mariner killed the albertross.
Rime of the ancient mariner summary part the sixth
On part the sixth of the rime of the ancient mariner their were two voices speaking and questioning about the previous events in the story such as the ship shooting off the rain the wind and the mariners crew. Later on in the story he could not pray I know this because in the poem it says `I could not draw my eyes from theirs (his crew) Nor turn them up and pray.` Suddenly the spell was gone it was almost like they were playing with the mariner. They saw a light they we quite curious, we established that it was a seraph man. After that the man on the sail started to fear the seraph man just like when the wedding guest the feared the mariner.
The Rime Of The Ancient Mariner summery part the fifth
At the start of part the fifth there was a slight change in the story,we established that things started to go his way such as light rain, the ship moving and his crew mates came back to help move the ship. The mariner got knocked out by the speed of the ship this tells us that it was no ordinary thing moving the ship.
Meanwhile he was knocked out two voices began to speak in his head it sounded like the woman and death speak about the man that loved the albatross that loved him. We thought that the spirit of the albatross was under the ship.
My metaphor: He stuck with his o`ertaking wings And chased along this tells me that the storm was so strong it swept up everything in its way.
What I think will happen next
What I think will happen next in The Rime Of The Ancient Mariner is that the mariner will start to sail again and then different birds will appear then he will just stare at it thinking about the albertross. Then as they disappear the clouds will form a shape of an albertross. He will also be granted with plenty of food and water to last the journey.
Rime of the ancient mariner summery part the fourth
In part the fourth we established that that he feared the ancient mariner because he said ” I fear thee, ancient Mariner! I fear thy skinny hand!” After he said he feared the ancient mariner he tried to pray but he couldn’t because earlier we found out that they had no water to drink to speak again. Then he thought their was no point of living so he closed his eyes and thought it was all a dream. Later on he started to bless the horrible things around him. Before you knew it he lifted the curse.
Summery of part the third
So what has happened is the sailors are hungry and thirsty it tells us in the text that their lips started to crust and turn black they could barely talk. So he bit his arm and began to such his own blood in able to speak again.
Later on they saw another ship coming their way it was a woman with blonde hair and red lips they all they asked themselves a series of questions they saw something next to her, they saw death they knew that their time was up and it was time to go. Them the woman said “The game is done! I’ve won! I’ve won!” earlier In the poem we established that they gambled for something personal. Then his crew started to drop like flies, one by one.
My Book
My book is based on a 12 year old that has everything that he ever wanted, meet Joe Spud he is the richest human alive! he spends his money on the most ridiculous things and forgets the more important things he has everything, but a friend…
A summery of the ancient marinor so far
What’s happened so far is at the start of the story there was a wedding and then a massive storm came the the albatross saved them all they started playing with the bird and then a group of sailors on a boat and they seemed to stumble upon the albatross it had huge wings, and watched it fly across the sky whilst helping them out of an ice burg but then the captain came out and shot the bird with a crossbow, no human has ever sailed across the sea before and their was no wind to push them, a couple minutes later they started to get hungry so the man put the albatross around his neck as if he were going to eat it.
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